I can say this is neither good or bad. It's nice, but there are many thing to improve:
- In the transitions between the song's sections, try to add some cymbals (Crashes for example)
- The mix lacks of reverb, which is very important in trance music. Try to put a reverb on the "Are You Ready" at 0:20 and at the voices after the first minute
- Add some more stuff to the drop lead, a supersaw could be a good choice.
- The drop (again) lacks of atmosphere in my opinion. You could add some sidechained saw chords mixed with the bass, or an arpeggio (in both cases, add some reverb, not too much though).
If you practice, you can reach very good levels, keep it up!